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13 March 2021

  • 23:4923:49, 13 March 2021 diff hist +43 The Storm-Bird Small grammar corrections, and specified that there is only a singular eyewitness account to the "summoning whaling ships", etc. Additive only. Tag: visualeditor-wikitext

11 March 2021

  • 10:3110:31, 11 March 2021 diff hist +112 The Storm-Bird Two edits: First, mentioning explicitly that Mr. Spices pregnancy has had noticeable complications which have been recognized by the other masters, regardless of whether they know the cause. I think this is important Tag: visualeditor-wikitext
  • 10:1610:16, 11 March 2021 diff hist +399 The Storm-Bird Added sentence about Viscountess, which seems relevant due to their sharing a common cause of nightmare-fighting. Tag: visualeditor-wikitext

28 February 2021

  • 11:4511:45, 28 February 2021 diff hist +396 The Storm-Bird Added a sentence about the Storm-bird's flying towards the Bazaar- might be linked to their master-progeny nature, since all other such offspring are kept there. It's a bit speculative, but I feel the detail about other such offspring being kept there as 'common property' should really be somewhere Tag: visualeditor-wikitext
  • 11:4011:40, 28 February 2021 diff hist +500 The Storm-Bird Added note about the Fingerkings' plans; also slightly altered the effect of Mr Spices' stash- the senses bit isn't strictly relevant, as it's only mentioned in contrast to the normal soporific effect on other creatures. Second alteration- the shadow of the bird being that of a young Master isn't brought on by the drug, just its normal nature, and should be in a separate sentence. Beyond that, a few grammatical changes, no content changes Tag: visualeditor-wikitext

26 February 2021

21 February 2021

16 February 2021