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{{Character | {{Character | ||
|image1=Sleeping | |image1=Sleeping.png | ||
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|location=[[The Octagonal Tomb]] | |location=[[The Octagonal Tomb]] | ||
|allegiance=[[The First City]] (formerly) | |allegiance=[[The First City]] (formerly) | ||
|alias=The Debtor<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Sleeper|The Sleeper|Fallen London|}} ''"The Debtor cannot be woken."''</ref><br> | |alias=The Debtor<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Sleeper|The Sleeper|Fallen London|}} ''"The Debtor cannot be woken."''</ref><br> | ||
The Sleeper<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Find_the_Sleeper_in_his_Tomb|Find the Sleeper in his Tomb|Fallen London|}}</ref> | The Sleeper<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Find_the_Sleeper_in_his_Tomb|Find the Sleeper in his Tomb|Fallen London|}}</ref> | ||
}}<blockquote>''"The Debtor cannot be woken. When he wakes, his debt will be due, and all of the interest as well. His promise was sworn by the Cedar that stood in the square of the first of all cities. It hears him still."''<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Sleeper|The Sleeper|Fallen London|}}</ref></blockquote> | |||
The '''Sleeping Merchant''' is a man from the [[First City]] who made a perilous deal with the [[Creditor]].__forcetoc__ | The '''Sleeping Merchant''' is a man from the [[First City]] who made a perilous deal with the [[Creditor]].__forcetoc__ | ||
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<blockquote>''"He was happy, before the fall. A good friend to me, and a benefactor to the people who knew him. The Fall into the Neath took it all away."''<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Let_the_Efficient_Commissioner_ask_questions_while_you_walk|Let the Efficient Commissioner ask questions while you walk|Fallen London|}}</ref></blockquote> | <blockquote>''"He was happy, before the fall. A good friend to me, and a benefactor to the people who knew him. The Fall into the Neath took it all away."''<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Let_the_Efficient_Commissioner_ask_questions_while_you_walk|Let the Efficient Commissioner ask questions while you walk|Fallen London|}}</ref></blockquote> | ||
[[File:Creditor.png|alt=Arid terrain.|thumb|[[The Creditor]]]] | [[File:Creditor.png|alt=Arid terrain.|thumb|[[The Creditor]]]] | ||
The Sleeping Merchant was once a | The Sleeping Merchant was once a rich and generous merchant from the [[First City]]. Unfortunately, his wealth evaporated after the city [[The Fallen Cities|Fell]], so he planned a caravan west to the [[Hinterlands]] with the [[The Manager|Manager]]'s permission, making promises and business deals as he prepared. In the process, he somehow procured the seal of the [[Echo Bazaar]] itself.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Let_the_Efficient_Commissioner_ask_questions_while_you_walk|Let the Efficient Commissioner ask questions while you walk|Fallen London|}} ''"[...] before the fall. [...] a benefactor to the people who knew him. The Fall [...] took it all away." [...] "After [...] he tried to... compensate. To provide for everyone in his care. [...] no longer had trading partners, [...] So he begged my permission to begin a new caravan, to re-establish his wealth [...] He borrowed [...] begged [...] promised [...] negotiated, [...] to the point of receiving the Bazaar's own Seal."''</ref> Once his journey began, however, his venture drew the attention of the [[Creditor]].<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Breathe_an_ancient_air|Breathe an ancient air|Fallen London|}} ''"One defendant at a time [...] before this Judge – summoned here if they tried to pass through these lands without leave. [...] The Merchant [...]"''</ref> | ||
The Merchant was brought to the [[Magistracy of the Evenlode]],<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Breathe_an_ancient_air|Breathe an ancient air|Fallen London|}} ''"Sometimes it was a capacious and echoing chamber, [...] The Merchant, [...] had promised so much [...] he had to crawl on hands and knees [...] | The Merchant was brought to the [[Magistracy of the Evenlode]],<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Breathe_an_ancient_air|Breathe an ancient air|Fallen London|}} ''"Sometimes it was a capacious and echoing chamber, [...] The Merchant, [...] had promised so much [...] he had to crawl on hands and knees [...]"''</ref> the Creditor's court.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Deeps_of_the_Magistracy|The Deeps of the Magistracy|Fallen London|}} ''"The Creditor used to live above," [...] "The Magistracy belonged to him [...]"''</ref><ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Ask_how_she_learned_about_the_Creditor|Ask how she learned about the Creditor|Fallen London|}} ''"Once the Creditor presided over judgements at the Evenlode."''</ref> The Creditor was worried that the First City's inhabitants would damage the Hinterlands, so it demanded the Bazaar provide collateral as insurance against this.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Meaning_what,_precisely%3F|Meaning what, precisely?|Fallen London|}} ''""A gage is a pledge of good faith," [...] it was meant to represent the promise that the Bazaar would prevent its people from causing too much damage."''</ref> For reasons unknown, this toll ended up being measured against ''every soul'' in the [[Neath]].<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Nature_of_the_Debt|The Nature of the Debt|Fallen London|}} ''"A price charged for crossing [...] calculated on the number of souls in the whole Neath – [...] Why would you [...] cost even for people [...] not going through the tollgate?"''</ref> The Merchant, desperate to escape<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Breathe_an_ancient_air|Breathe an ancient air|Fallen London|}} ''"To escape [...] he promised an even more impossible repayment [...]"''</ref> and ignorant of the Neath's true population,<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Debt|The Debt|Fallen London|}} ''"A payment for every soul in the Neath," [...] "The Merchant only knew his [...] city; [...] miscounted the cost.""''</ref> used the Bazaar's seal to promise this payment.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Breathe_an_ancient_air|Breathe an ancient air|Fallen London|}} ''"The Merchant, [...] To escape [...] he promised [...] on behalf of himself, and on behalf of the Bazaar. He pressed his seal [...]"''</ref> | ||
== Sealed == | == Sealed == | ||
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''"Mr Mirrors may have sealed him into Parabola. But there are many people now who might unseal him again."''<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/A_Conclave_of_the_Masters|A Conclave of the Masters|Fallen London|}}</ref></blockquote> | ''"Mr Mirrors may have sealed him into Parabola. But there are many people now who might unseal him again."''<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/A_Conclave_of_the_Masters|A Conclave of the Masters|Fallen London|}}</ref></blockquote> | ||
[[File: | [[File:Sleeping merchant.png|alt=A hazy picture of a caravan.|thumb|Dreams of a caravan.]] | ||
As it turned out, the Bazaar would not be able to pay | As it turned out, the Bazaar would not be able to pay the gage promised without liquidating the entire city and potentially itself.<ref>{{Citation|Ask_what_might_happen_if_the_Creditor_does_contact_the_Bazaar|editor does contact the Bazaar|Fallen London|}} ''""The most likely outcome," [...] "is that the Bazaar would attempt to honour the debt [...] even if [...] damaging to London, or fatal to itself.""''</ref><ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Sleeper|The Sleeper|Fallen London|}} ''"The struggle to meet that pledge. The city almost sold [...]"''</ref> Thus, the [[Masters]] sealed the Merchant in a permanent slumber,<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Ask_about_the_Bazaar%27s_ignorance|Ask about the Bazaar's ignorance|Fallen London|}} ''"When the debt was incurred [...] We ourselves found a [...] resolution [...] I was the one who thought of putting the Merchant to sleep."''</ref> and his physical body was interred within the [[The Octagonal Tomb|Octagonal Tomb]].<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Leave_the_barge_(The_Octagonal_Tomb)|Leave the barge (The Octagonal Tomb)|Fallen London|}} ''"[...] the shattered remains of [...] where the Merchant once slept."''</ref> This plan froze the debt temporarily, but should the Merchant wake again, the debt will be due.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Sleeper|The Sleeper|Fallen London|}} ''"The Debtor cannot be woken [...] When he wakes, his debt will be due, [...] the loophole [...] that sent the Debtor to sleep instead."''</ref> | ||
Now, the Merchant dreams of his caravan as if his journey had just begun,<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Concentrate_very_hard_on_the_Sleeping_Merchant|Concentrate very hard on the Sleeping Merchant|Fallen London|}} ''"The Merchant is not dreamless. He dreams of his caravan [...] He dreams of coming home with his wealth [...]"''</ref> but time did not wait for him: his body is now withered,<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Find_the_Sleeper_in_his_Tomb|Find the Sleeper in his Tomb|Fallen London|}} ''"The woken man is older than most tomb colonists. His skin is thin [...] His muscles have dwindled to nothing [...]"''</ref> and his kith and kin have long passed away.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Let_the_Efficient_Commissioner_ask_questions_while_you_walk|Let the Efficient Commissioner ask questions while you walk|Fallen London|}} ''"The Manager looks her way, [...] "Of everyone who knew him then, I alone still live.""''</ref> | Now, the Merchant dreams of his caravan as if his journey had just begun,<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Concentrate_very_hard_on_the_Sleeping_Merchant|Concentrate very hard on the Sleeping Merchant|Fallen London|}} ''"The Merchant is not dreamless. He dreams of his caravan [...] He dreams of coming home with his wealth [...]"''</ref> but time did not wait for him: his body is now withered,<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Find_the_Sleeper_in_his_Tomb|Find the Sleeper in his Tomb|Fallen London|}} ''"The woken man is older than most tomb colonists. His skin is thin [...] His muscles have dwindled to nothing [...]"''</ref> and his kith and kin have long passed away.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Let_the_Efficient_Commissioner_ask_questions_while_you_walk|Let the Efficient Commissioner ask questions while you walk|Fallen London|}} ''"The Manager looks her way, [...] "Of everyone who knew him then, I alone still live.""''</ref> | ||
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