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|location=[[The Neath]]|alias=The Crossroads Shaded By Cedars|notable_inhabitants=}}<blockquote>''"Only two things are known to remain of the First City: the name, the Crossroads Shaded By Cedars, and the saying: even the First City was young when Babylon fell."''<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Sidebar_Snippets#The_other_cities Sidebar Snippet: What was the First City?, ''Fallen London'']</ref><br | |location=[[The Neath]]|alias=The Crossroads Shaded By Cedars|notable_inhabitants=}}<blockquote>''"Only two things are known to remain of the First City: the name, the Crossroads Shaded By Cedars, and the saying: even the First City was young when Babylon fell."''<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Sidebar_Snippets#The_other_cities Sidebar Snippet: What was the First City?, ''Fallen London'']</ref><br> | ||
The '''First City''', known as the '''Crossroads Shaded By Cedars''', was originally located in ancient Mesopotamia<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Crouching_in_a_low_stone_building|Crouching in a low stone building|Fallen London|}} ''" | ''"The first taught [[The Sleeping Merchant|restraint]]..."''<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Bask_in_the_light_1|Bask in the light|Fallen London|}}</ref></blockquote>'''The First City''', known as the '''Crossroads Shaded By Cedars''', was originally located in ancient Mesopotamia<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Crouching_in_a_low_stone_building|Crouching in a low stone building|Fallen London|}} ''"the land between the Caspian and Mediterranean seas"''</ref> and is estimated to date back to the third millennium BCE. The remnants of this city live on in [[Polythreme]]; ruins and artifacts of the First City can also be found in the Hinterlands, notably under the [[The Magistracy of the Evenlode|Magistracy of the Evenlode]]. | ||
== The First Fall == | == The First Fall == | ||
<blockquote>''"The sudden sunlight is dazzling, prompting you to step into the shade of the trees nearby. Here the air is sweet and cool; the cedar sap is heady and light. Down the path are a number of small, grey-brick homes. Children in curious garb squeal with joy, workers shout – in an unfamiliar language, but the tone is cheerful. This is a place of industrious contentment."''<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Season_of_Ruins The Season of Ruins, ''Fallen London''] </ref></blockquote>Before its Fall, the First City thrived as a major commercial hub in Mesopotamia,<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Transform_this_dream_with_vistas_of_the_First_City Transform this dream with vistas of the First City, ''Fallen London''] ''"At your command, roads cross the jungle, radiating from a central place. Once, the glory of the First City was that it was connected to everywhere else. [...]"''</ref> flourishing through trade with its | <blockquote>''"The sudden sunlight is dazzling, prompting you to step into the shade of the trees nearby. Here the air is sweet and cool; the cedar sap is heady and light. Down the path are a number of small, grey-brick homes. Children in curious garb squeal with joy, workers shout – in an unfamiliar language, but the tone is cheerful. This is a place of industrious contentment."''<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Season_of_Ruins The Season of Ruins, ''Fallen London''] </ref></blockquote>Before its Fall, the First City thrived as a major commercial hub in Mesopotamia,<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Transform_this_dream_with_vistas_of_the_First_City Transform this dream with vistas of the First City, ''Fallen London''] ''"At your command, roads cross the jungle, radiating from a central place. Once, the glory of the First City was that it was connected to everywhere else. [...]"''</ref> flourishing through trade with its sister-cities.<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Transform_this_dream_with_vistas_of_the_First_City Transform this dream with vistas of the First City, ''Fallen London''] ''"We had done something wrong; we were cut off from our sister cities, which were bound to us by treaty and the source of our wealth. What else was there to do but make the journey?"''</ref> It had established contact with ancient China, welcoming merchants from afar. Among these travelers was the man who would become the [[The King with a Hundred Hearts|King with a Hundred Hearts]]; he was a Chinese merchant whose caravan met disaster, forcing him to seek refuge in "a mud brick town."<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Looking_in_the_garden Looking in the garden, ''Fallen London''] ''"You see a group of travellers in the dress of ancient China, haggling for water at a desert spring. A few more steps and the same group are laughing and eating fruit in an orchard. A few steps more, and one of that group, wounded and desperate, looks down a road at a mud brick town next to a cedar grove. Hot, dusty plains stretch to the horizon."''</ref> He received an audience with the settlement's priest-king,<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Looking_in_the_garden Looking in the garden, ''Fallen London''] ''"More steps down the path. A priest-king receives the traveller, in a temple painted with eyes. The priest-king's court are amazed at the traveller, and especially impressed by his silk clothes."''</ref> who soon fell in love with him, and they began a relationship.<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Looking_in_the_garden Looking in the garden, ''Fallen London''] ''"More steps. The priest-king's court feasts in the open air, under cedar trees. The priest-king and the traveller are seated together, laughing and kissing."''</ref> | ||
Some time later, the merchant fell gravely ill and was near death.<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Looking_in_the_garden Looking in the garden, ''Fallen London''] ''"The traveller writhes and twitches on a stone slab, in some kind of fit. He looks wretchedly thin and haggard. A short step from death. The priest-king weeps over him."''</ref> In desperation, the priest-king accepted the aid of [[Mr Cups]] and [[Mr Candles]], two of the [[Masters of the Bazaar]], who offered to save his lover's life in exchange for the city.<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Looking_in_the_garden Looking in the garden, ''Fallen London''] ''"Two figures step into the chamber, hunched and garbed in many-petalled black cloaks. Masters of the Bazaar. One carries a clay cup, the other an unlit candle. The one with the cup says, "I think we can be of service to each other. Allow me to propose an exchange...""''</ref> The Masters upheld their end of the bargain, but in the process, the merchant was transformed into the clay King of [[Polythreme]] rather than remaining merely a man. The priest-king's city was claimed by the [[Echo Bazaar]] and transported to the [[Neath]], and became the first of the [[The Fallen Cities|Fallen Cities]].<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Meeting_the_King Meeting the King, Fallen London] ''"[...] The Masters took a diamond from the great glowing mountain in the South and gave it to me for a heart. They made me like this."''</ref> | Some time later, the merchant fell gravely ill and was near death.<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Looking_in_the_garden Looking in the garden, ''Fallen London''] ''"The traveller writhes and twitches on a stone slab, in some kind of fit. He looks wretchedly thin and haggard. A short step from death. The priest-king weeps over him."''</ref> In desperation, the priest-king accepted the aid of [[Mr Cups]] and [[Mr Candles]], two of the [[Masters of the Bazaar]], who offered to save his lover's life in exchange for the city.<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Looking_in_the_garden Looking in the garden, ''Fallen London''] ''"Two figures step into the chamber, hunched and garbed in many-petalled black cloaks. Masters of the Bazaar. One carries a clay cup, the other an unlit candle. The one with the cup says, "I think we can be of service to each other. Allow me to propose an exchange...""''</ref> The Masters upheld their end of the bargain, but in the process, the merchant was transformed into the clay King of [[Polythreme]] rather than remaining merely a man. The priest-king's city was claimed by the [[Echo Bazaar]] and transported to the [[Neath]], and became the first of the [[The Fallen Cities|Fallen Cities]].<ref>[https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/Meeting_the_King Meeting the King, Fallen London] ''"[...] The Masters took a diamond from the great glowing mountain in the South and gave it to me for a heart. They made me like this."''</ref> |