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Off the [[Carnelian Coast]], just visible from [[Apis Meet]], there was once a kingdom called Mereid.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Exile%27s_Chalice|The Exile's Chalice|Fallen London|}} ''"I was guarding the walls of Apis Meet when it happened. [...] It was just visible from the mouth of Adam's Way, a distant jewel on the horizon."''</ref> The city's founders, the First Queen and First King, were exiles from the [[Presbyterate]]: the Prester's daughter and her beloved. The First Queen had petitioned her father to heal her lover's [[animescence]], but in doing so violated the Prester's edict against outsiders entering [[Nidah]].<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Exile%27s_Chalice|The Exile's Chalice|Fallen London|}} ''A couple – a woman, with his same proud jaw and regal bearing, and a man, sickly and thin – approach the figure in his holy city at the base of a bright mountain. The ruler's aspect becomes cruel and twisted, and he rejects his petitioners.''</ref> Rebuffed, the First Queen stole her father's Chalice — a treasure carved from one of the Garden's trees — hoping its curative powers could heal her lover.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Exile%27s_Chalice|The Exile's Chalice|Fallen London|}} ''"The chalice. It was carved from one of the trees of the Garden. The First Queen stole it from her father, the Prester." Their eyes are mournful. "All she wanted was to heal her partner."''</ref> Though the Chalice could only delay the First King's illness<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Exile%27s_Chalice|The Exile's Chalice|Fallen London|}} ''The daughter and the soul-sick other, twined like lovers, like climbing ivy. Life remembers being taken, far from root-soil, vessel still, pouring honeyed balm into the soul-sickness. The sickness returning the other to earth, pruned from the daughter's arms.''</ref>, its primal vitality allowed Mereid to flourish. The First Queen planted the Chalice beneath Mereid, and from it grew an enormous tree, lifting the city from the water and suffusing it with vibrant plant life.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Exile%27s_Chalice|The Exile's Chalice|Fallen London|}} ''An idea takes root in your mind, an idea planted by the First Queen into Mereid's barren ground in desperate hope. The idea sprouts branches. The idea lifts a whole city up and out of the zee on vast and loving boughs. The idea is the chalice...''</ref> | Off the [[Carnelian Coast]], just visible from [[Apis Meet]], there was once a kingdom called Mereid.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Exile%27s_Chalice|The Exile's Chalice|Fallen London|}} ''"I was guarding the walls of Apis Meet when it happened. [...] It was just visible from the mouth of Adam's Way, a distant jewel on the horizon."''</ref> The city's founders, the First Queen and First King, were exiles from the [[Presbyterate]]: the Prester's daughter and her beloved. The First Queen had petitioned her father to heal her lover's [[animescence]], but in doing so violated the Prester's edict against outsiders entering [[Nidah]].<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Exile%27s_Chalice|The Exile's Chalice|Fallen London|}} ''A couple – a woman, with his same proud jaw and regal bearing, and a man, sickly and thin – approach the figure in his holy city at the base of a bright mountain. The ruler's aspect becomes cruel and twisted, and he rejects his petitioners.''</ref> Rebuffed, the First Queen stole her father's Chalice — a treasure carved from one of the Garden's trees — hoping its curative powers could heal her lover.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Exile%27s_Chalice|The Exile's Chalice|Fallen London|}} ''"The chalice. It was carved from one of the trees of the Garden. The First Queen stole it from her father, the Prester." Their eyes are mournful. "All she wanted was to heal her partner."''</ref> Though the Chalice could only delay the First King's illness<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Exile%27s_Chalice|The Exile's Chalice|Fallen London|}} ''The daughter and the soul-sick other, twined like lovers, like climbing ivy. Life remembers being taken, far from root-soil, vessel still, pouring honeyed balm into the soul-sickness. The sickness returning the other to earth, pruned from the daughter's arms.''</ref>, its primal vitality allowed Mereid to flourish. The First Queen planted the Chalice beneath Mereid, and from it grew an enormous tree, lifting the city from the water and suffusing it with vibrant plant life.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Exile%27s_Chalice|The Exile's Chalice|Fallen London|}} ''An idea takes root in your mind, an idea planted by the First Queen into Mereid's barren ground in desperate hope. The idea sprouts branches. The idea lifts a whole city up and out of the zee on vast and loving boughs. The idea is the chalice...''</ref> | ||
The city was populated by outcasts, those who were exiled from their homes for Coveting that Which Was Not Theirs to Covet, and they made it beautiful in the face of their losses.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Season_of_Explorations|The Season of Explorations|Fallen London|}} ''"Its name was Mereid. Its people were cast-outs. They were exiled for the crime of Coveting that Which Was Not Theirs to Covet. They made their city beautiful in defiance..."''</ref> But it was surrounded by enemies; the Prester condemned it to sink beneath the waves for defying him, and [[Lady Black]] wanted the city for her palace and its citizens for her companions. Slowly, Mereid began to sink.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Season_of_Explorations|The Season of Explorations|Fallen London|}} ''"The island was always sinking. Something else wanted the city more"''</ref> | The city was populated by outcasts, those who were exiled from their homes for Coveting that Which Was Not Theirs to Covet, and they made it beautiful in the face of their losses.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Season_of_Explorations|The Season of Explorations|Fallen London|}} ''"Its name was Mereid. Its people were cast-outs. They were exiled for the crime of Coveting that Which Was Not Theirs to Covet. They made their city beautiful in defiance..."''</ref> But it was surrounded by enemies; the Prester condemned it to sink beneath the waves for defying him, and [[Death#Lady Black|Lady Black]] wanted the city for her palace and its citizens for her companions. Slowly, Mereid began to sink.<ref>{{Citation|https://fallenlondon.wiki/wiki/The_Season_of_Explorations|The Season of Explorations|Fallen London|}} ''"The island was always sinking. Something else wanted the city more"''</ref> | ||
===A Bargain with the Deep=== | ===A Bargain with the Deep=== |